Bs Poem

[bentdrummer]

My mind was blown today in nothing but an ordinary way
some believe in a path written long before you choose
I create life within myself I will win I will lose
But you won't pass me by without learning a thing or two
the way you look at me the way you say my name
it's just not right sometimes it's just not the same
speak my mind? I am told
with one cheesy line your sold
that's something we all love about each other
so easily lead down the path to distruction
it's nobody elses fault can't blame your mother
your messed in the head because you choose to be
your vision is blurred cause you don't want to see
can't risk your faith in somthing false
don't want to race your settled pulse
so much easier to pretend your alive
to make such a fake mask
really, do you think its gonna last
what's with luck I cant be bothered anymore
who really cares!! who's keeping score
not me thats for sure!

[Placidfemme]

bentdrummer said:

the way you look at me the way you say my name
it's just not right sometimes it's just not the same

I like that bit the best

keep writting

[WannabeAnarchy]

babe can u fix where she tried to do colours?? thanks.


Good poem huh??

[Placidfemme]

there ya go all fixed...

yeah it is good, she should keep writting

[WannabeAnarchy]

she writes heaps apparently. More than u. Bookloads.